A real gem from aggie wire. (USA Today*)
My self-assigned task for the weekend was to critique paragrasentence 4.
1. I feel the $9.95er here became befuddled and mixed up two common cliches: "Fake it till you make it" and "make or break." Sadly, the spelling "brake" was avoided.
2. Four words: aggy, shear, sheep, confidence. That's all. My work is done with this section.
3. Yeah, idk what to say about this. I assume he meant, "put the pressure on either young man's shoulders" but I can't be sure. I do think it is misleading though. Jumbo only seems to make a change at QB after injury makes the decision for him.
4. Paragraph = Sentence: This is a common style exhibited throughout the article and aggy "journalism." When in doubt, add, a comma.,
*Bonus assignment: Paragrasentence 2 mentions that he and his aggy brethren felt most top 25 polls would include aggy. He works for USA Today. USA Today did not list aggy in their top 25.